daugust's Journal

PRINCESS OF LOVE
Princess so white,so young so fair
Can i feel the locks of your golden hair.
The touch of your hand..your lips on mine.
Voice in my head.you love her it said./

And then i knew...that it was true.
My princess of love..was you./

The touch of your hand..your lips to mine..
Constantly flow through my spellbound mind.
Rush through my soul with refreshing control/

And the kiss you gave was the gift of life.
Voice in my head ,she loves you it said.

And then i knew that it was true.

My princess of love was you./

Princess so young so soft
Like a rainbow,you hang aloft
And the kiss you gave was the gift of life
And then i knew it was true
My princess of love was you/

by Dennis J Teel

i'm still working on the song,even tho' at this point it's merely a poem or lyrics,whatever.i'm trying to add two more verses.i have this weird writer's block after i get just a couple verses finished...all of my writing is this way all the time. i hate it.this song was originally written with an easy lsitening(and listening) melody attached(mentally as i was writing it).

i had other verses on paper but i kept trashcanning them..they just didn't feel right.

maybe there should be music where i feel more verses should be put.maybe that's it.maybe i should learn to write music..that might help..no..i'm at the age i wouldn't have the patience/.i'm well out of my high school years and in fact just last night i shaved the beard out of my ears and nostrils,so learning to write music won't do.

it's copyrighted,as it's right here on this blog as well as in one of my published web pages
and dated of course through their server as proof when it was written/.

also i wrote it in the presence of three other people.
Rover,Fido and Spot
don't laugh,my brothers won't like it.they don't exactly care for their names either/.

below is a writing i finished a few minutes ago...

THE STARS TONIGHT.
I'm looking at the stars tonight.
There's black and silver, bits of flashing hue.
I'm dancing in the open air,by myself.
Just wondering off on you.

Dreams don't mean much to people anymore
They're busy working, trying to make a living.
Running around in circles as they try
To make enough from what their giving.

I'm looking at the stars tonight.
My soul desires love.
Your face is floating through my mind
You're what the night reminds me of.

Can't you imagine us together
Inside the arms of love
Can you see us kiising softly
Til the sun comes up above.

Dreams can come alive
They can come true
Dreams aren't just for kids my love
But they're for me and you.

I'm looking at the stars tonight.
There's more to this than just a dream
There's more to us than what it seems
Dreams are hopes that can come true.
I'm looking at the stars tonight.
They're shining down on you./
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9:43 PM 7/14/2009
I penned this a few minutes ago.yeah it needs work...alot ....i was thinking of how i feel sometimes at night when i'm staring off in to the night from here at the lake.

if i ever find the girl i'm writing about i'll be happy.

until then i'll have to be satisfied with my dog.
he looks so so horrible in a two piece.

Current Mood: i want kirstie alley
Current Music: i hate white people and non white people